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Cheer up? by ~Scififreakmi:iconScififreakmi:

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You tell me to cheer up
You tell me to be happy
That this will all be worth it someday
Well how can I?
How can I believe this is true?
When the person who wants me to be happy
Happens to be you?
©2007-2009 ~Scififreakmi
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Submitted: July 11, 2007
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~Dreaming-Of-Rain:iconDreaming-Of-Rain: Jul 11, 2007, 12:20:00 PM
i love this one! i think its my favorite of yours so far... its sooo sad! :(

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Someone told me today that there are as many unfilled dreams as there are miles from us to the stars.. but really all that means is that we have to reach higher.
~Dreaming-Of-Rain:iconDreaming-Of-Rain: Jul 11, 2007, 12:22:09 PM
k i know that this is kinda weird since you just added one of my things to your favs but i gotta add this one.. i love it too much not to.

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Someone told me today that there are as many unfilled dreams as there are miles from us to the stars.. but really all that means is that we have to reach higher.
~Kovu-Shukani:iconKovu-Shukani: Jul 11, 2007, 1:11:45 PM
hmm, kind of forceful emotion. i like, especially with that rhyming ending.

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"Next time you want to stab me in the back, have the guts to do it to my face."
~ Cpt. Malcolm Reynolds from Firefly
~Scififreakmi:iconScififreakmi: Jul 11, 2007, 4:10:44 PM
thanks. the rhyming ending didn't exist originally... i added it when i was typing the poem into the submit thing. lol

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How do you leave the past behind when it keeps finding ways to get to your heart?

I wish I could fly, I'd magically appear and disappear. I wish I could fly, I'd fly far away from here.

And if you try to deny me I'll never die, I'm alive...
~Scififreakmi:iconScififreakmi: Jul 11, 2007, 4:12:21 PM
awww thanks. i know its sad... but its actually directed at some people in my life right now... not like they'd ever get that, but you know. writing it out made me feel better. lol

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How do you leave the past behind when it keeps finding ways to get to your heart?

I wish I could fly, I'd magically appear and disappear. I wish I could fly, I'd fly far away from here.

And if you try to deny me I'll never die, I'm alive...
~Scififreakmi:iconScififreakmi: Jul 11, 2007, 4:13:23 PM
thank you so much! lol

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How do you leave the past behind when it keeps finding ways to get to your heart?

I wish I could fly, I'd magically appear and disappear. I wish I could fly, I'd fly far away from here.

And if you try to deny me I'll never die, I'm alive...
~hells-hitman:iconhells-hitman: Jul 14, 2007, 9:47:23 PM
aww...michelle...

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If all instances of life cease to exist, does the universe cease to exist because there is nothing to aknowledge its existance?
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